Inspired by my friend Karen's awesome blog, TrainWrite:
Your character is running for the train. The doors are about to close. What does he do? Does he try to leap into the car? Does he stick his foot in to prevent the doors from closing? Does he give up and make no effort at all?
Now think of those around him. How do they respond to his actions? How does he relate to them through body language or speech? Imagine there is someone else also trying to make the train. Does he try to hold the door for her? Does he even notice, or is he only focused on getting to his destination?
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